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About Me Premium Member Wannabe Novelist Jordan Buck21/Female/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 2 Years
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My First Proposal  ...for an interested best friend, a boyfriend, or a husband.   
 
You want to reach me,  Hear my voice; but,  For me, murder sleeps in a telephone receiver;  
But, not in the sound of your voice.  Would you accept this horrid phobia; be patient, and still try to find me?  Or would you let me go for someone simpler -- always a call away?  ..one you don't have to write letters just to share great news?  ..one you don't have to crunch your whole self into a text when something huge is pulling at your heart?  A different someone without such pathetic irrational fears?
My Proposal.
by *motionlessSndtrk

All fears and insecurities are laid bare in this proposal, leaving the reader feeling raw and and incomplete. The reader immediately in...

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Christmas carols echo solemn  Against the walls of a cellar.  Gathered tightly in a dim room  Strangers knit together  Each afraid to tell her.   
She’s heard of Santa, his white hair;  Closer sits a thick-bearded man.  Wide-eyed, three and homeless.  A new simple doll is grand.  She smiles once Jesus has taken her hand.   
With Him,  She sits so close to Heaven,  And so far from Home.   
Perched in a third-story bedroom,  She watches anger, heated; burst ablaze.  Rushing to lock the door,  She trips, in terror she lays;  Pleading like any
So Far from Home
by *motionlessSndtrk

This is a very powerful poem, it actually gave me chills! The rawness is a necessary part of this piece, it needs no editing. Like the ...

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925 deviations, 4 crits, 33 news, 223 journals, 1 poll 

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No deviants said Check every single one, you're a bad deviant if you don't!!
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I'm 21 years old and I want to make an impact, somewhere, anywhere.
I've written one novel, self published, and am working on another. I author a webcomic, because I love to make people laugh. I'm addicted to deviantART and World of Warcraft. I spend most of my time on the web at one of those.
I currently attend the University of Tennessee in the major of Geological and Earth Sciences. I geek out over minerals, volcanoes, and the first generation poke`mon. They don't make them like they used to!

I love meeting new people, so please stop by and introduce yourself. :) :heart:

Aww ickle!

Journal Entry: Sat Nov 14, 2009, 9:02 AM

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My baby cousin may be getting a deviantART!!
She's coming to look at my drawings, I'm excited and scared. She is a good artist for her age (10) but I don't know if she can handle the dArama! lol

If she gets an account I'll let you all know, and then you have to go encourage her! She's a blooming artist who needs some love! :heart:

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  • Current Residence: TN
  • deviantWEAR sizing preference: large (on shirts anyway)
  • Print preference: Lustre
  • Interests: Art of course, Music, Writing, reading, fantasy, the psyche, mythology..
  • Favourite movie: Fight Club, V for Vendetta, Phantom of the Opera, The Number 23, and more..
  • Favourite band or musician: too many to name
  • Favourite genre of music: hard rock
  • Favourite artist: Dorian Cleavenger (www.dorianart.com)
  • Favourite poet or writer: Sherrilyn Kenyon, Stephanie Meyer, David Clement-Davies
  • Favourite style of art: Traditional
  • Operating System: XP
  • Skin of choice: kinda pale
  • Favourite game: World of Warcraft, Tetris, DDR
  • Favourite gaming platform: the floor
  • Favourite cartoon character: Inuyasha, Chii, (Atashi)
  • Personal Quote: Karma's a bitch. No, actually, she's a whore. She'll fuck you over on the first date!
  • Tools of the Trade: pencil, DigiMemo, camera, imagination

Comments


:iconizroxmysox:
~IZroxmysox 14 hours 8 minutes ago
Hi Jo! I got an acount! I just found your acount, and it took me forever! Just wanted to let you know that I'm on!
:icondestinechaos:
~DestineChaos Oct 16, 2009, 12:44:44 AM
Suprise-- urm *thinks* somthing or other! :dance: :boogie: W00t!:
:icontreuvontrapp:
*TreuVonTrapp Oct 16, 2009, 2:32:18 PM
lol, thanks?

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:jester:

You need chaos in your soul to give birth to a dancing star.
Friedrich Nietzsche

best emote EVER ->:typerhappy:

You Are Lovely. Pass It On: [link]
:iconitarotchi:
~itarotchi Sep 2, 2009, 8:11:52 PM
Thanks for the fav

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My Immaginary friend thinks you have serious problems ^_^
:iconmchenry:
=mchenry Aug 28, 2009, 1:12:28 PM
Hi, :wave:

Thanks for the :+fav: on my photo:
Oriental dance 03

I really appreciate it. :bow:

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Anything goes !
The only limits are the frontiers of your imaginations !
If you reached this edge ... Go beyond !

Atari-Junkie since 1976 and dammed proudly on it !
:icontjames09:
~Tjames09 Aug 18, 2009, 10:27:59 AM
Thank you so much for the fav ! i really appreciate it !
:iconkuroi-sama:
Mood: Joy ~Kuroi-Sama Aug 11, 2009, 11:41:35 PM
Thanks for da :+fav:!!! :D
Yer support is much appreciated :highfive:
:icontreuvontrapp:
*TreuVonTrapp Aug 12, 2009, 5:01:50 PM
You're welcome! :)

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:jester:

You need chaos in your soul to give birth to a dancing star.
Friedrich Nietzsche

best emote EVER ->:typerhappy:

You Are Lovely. Pass It On: [link]
:iconjeffrey:
~jeffrey Aug 10, 2009, 2:46:08 AM
Thanks so much for :+fav:ing!
:strip:

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:icontreuvontrapp:
*TreuVonTrapp Aug 10, 2009, 6:58:51 AM
Of course! Thank you for making that deviation! :)

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:jester:

You need chaos in your soul to give birth to a dancing star.
Friedrich Nietzsche

best emote EVER ->:typerhappy:

You Are Lovely. Pass It On: [link]
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